Sipping tea at a wayside stall,
I watch a cat sauntering by.
She regards me; I smile at her-
She pauses - lifts a paw -
She moves –
How graceful, how lithe, how feminine!
On her croups, she looks at me, blinks –
Twitches her ears – this way, that way.
She glances up at a crow, intent.
A man walks up –
The cat appraises.
At peace, she examines her left forepaw
And licks.
A fallen leaf stirs in the wind –
Cat looks at it, ears pointed.
A mongrel runs by – the Cat’s tail
Stiffens and then d-e-l-i-b-e-r-a-t-e-l-y
Twirls and flicks (it scares me).
She follows him, rapt eye-ed
As he goes out of sight.
The cat gazes at me.
She stares at me, unblinking -
Uncomfortable, I look elsewhere.
How she demands attention,
How swiftly does she ignore!
Kneeling, with love
I offer her a piece of cake, a bit sodden -
I never thought
A cat could express such disdain!
Oh well, you never liked cats, I thought,
Don’t try so hard to, now.
Sheepish, I realize
That the grudging admiration
I have for cats
For their attitude
For their sly, self-assured ways
Their aloofness, pooh-poohing
The rest of the world –
Is the same that I have
For certain women I know!
********* Balachandran V,
Dey you are inviting wrath with the last verse. Good luck!!!
ReplyDeleteBut well said and thought out piece.Quite a matter of fact. Difficult to argue to deny.
And are you sure the feline was feminine?
Hahahaha. The last line deserves a piece of cake. :-)
ReplyDeleteWatching the cat walk;
beautiful verses you chalk :-)
PoochayaaNinnente du:kham
ReplyDeleteinteresting simili.. makes sense now that u mention :) so if women are cats, men are dogs? no wonder marriage is so difficult ;D
ReplyDelete@Anil: The poem was duly read out, censored and approved by you-know-who! :D
ReplyDelete@ Insignia: I have watched a lot of ladies too! :D :D
@ Ashok: Patti aayath-ennude punyavum!
@ K: And then you see the rare sight of dogs& cats in love with each other!
Cats sure have an "attitude"
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to NOT admire!
From the cafetaria I look outside I see kittens - they amuse me with their ways;
They are on their own,
Just a few days, from the day they are born...
Catwatching, I've been too
And also like your view :)
Don't know why. I don't like them the way I like dogs. I think they are more parasitic, like some women you mentioned.!
ReplyDelete@Doc: 'Kodu kaii!! :D
ReplyDelete@RGB: You learn a lot from observing! :)
Oh , the angels with whiskers !
ReplyDelete@Kavitha: Angels? Hmmmm..!
ReplyDeletebtw, I did as you told for the twitter, but nothing happened????
I noticed the share tab was not there--i assumed that you chose to remove it.It is a two months old feature and is available for all the blogspot blogs...let me see how can i help again.
ReplyDeleteA pleasant write and one much enjoyed by me...Why? Well, I happen to be a cat lover. They are so independent and pretty much uncaring of what we like or think...Lol.. As for the line at the end.....hmmmmmmm, I am self assured that I do unto others as I would have them do unto me; therefore, I become likeable without a problem....lol.. Great write Balan...You make everything so very enjoyable....
ReplyDelete@Sandy: Thanks, Sandy! You'll notice I said, 'Grudging admiration'!! ;)
ReplyDeleteha! how we play aloof and what fun :)
ReplyDelete@Sumi: Well, you are not one among them!
ReplyDeleteOut of the blues? Welcome back. You have missed some of my gabbing.