‘I am tired’, thought he, as he poured
‘Where has it all gone, the sweet waters
That glinted silver in the morning sun
That glistened in the pale moon light
That I carried from afar and gave
So that men and beasts and plants
And the dry crumbling earth may thrive
So that life may spark in them
So that Thy creations shall not grieve!’
Wiping sweat off his brow
He paused as he heard a voice.
He raised his head, looked up
As he saw a vision.
Clouds parted before him –
Above, in the sky,
The clouds drew a painting.
Men, the Aquarian saw
Had fouled the waters with filth.
Poisons spread, laying waste the fish
Wetlands were filled with soil
Seas turned red in oil
Trees were felled
Rivers were dammed
Ponds were killed
Birds were dead
Beasts, bloated, floated dead
In the sweet and clear water
That now turned an angry black.
Clouds closed up the sky –
Then a wind blew, howling
And it rained black, red blood.
Beside him kneeled the last child of earth
Huddling, hugging the last green plant.
************* Balachandran V,
This is a 'commissioned' poem. I was asked to give a poem for a magazine's special issue on water. The poem may undergo deletion/alterations , though I submitted it since the deadline had arrived. It is kind of 'contrived' - I don't like it much, myself!
its not bad at all!!!.. i like the end... must have been a different experience writing on commission! a different sort of challenge.
ReplyDeleteNeed to read it again and again to understand this fully.
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Thanks, K! I don't like challenges! But the theme is quite close to my heart; one could write pages and pages about nature and environment, but poetry brings out the most condensed form and sometimes conveying more too.
ReplyDelete@Subbu:The magazine is called 'Executive Knowledge Lines' or EKL for short. I will send you a couple of .pdf versions of earlier issues. Its more or science and technology; I provide a small element of nature conservation etc..
@ subbu: Is it obtuse? Aquarius is the water carrier symbol in Zodiac (Jan18-Feb 19 -my star, a coincidence). He is lamenting about what humans have done with this precious element. The rest is just a poetic imagination..
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