Last night you came
In my dreams.
You were sitting on a chair
And glanced sideways
At me, standing.
You looked young and slightly plumb.
You never were plumb, I thought in my dream,
Amused.
You talked to me; kind words -
And smiled gently, with warmth.
Listening, I wondered happily
How you had changed.
In my dream, I remember
I wished, wistfully
At the images beginning to fade
That it wasn't a dream.
But then -
As it narrowed to a thin bright line
And then to a receding dot
In a pitch black screen -
A dove sitting on the window sill
Rose, in a flurry of wings.
**************** Balachandran V, Trivandrum 22.09.2009
Nice..! :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines balan sir!!
ReplyDeletei too wondered if the person undergone some metamorphosis..too shock no?
ReplyDeleteWhere do you get these wonderful photographs ? they enliven ure blog!
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful images very close to my heart Balanji.. nice to read
ReplyDeletewow! time was suspended for a moment!
ReplyDelete@pjk: Thanks! I would be happy if you could care to look at the earlier poems too, at your leisure. I would value your critical opinion.
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